Chapter 1 - Page 18

30 Aug 2007 04:03 pm

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Author's Comments:

hiromi,

Nanana. Yeah, as you can tell the basic storyline's gonna be cliche but I like oldschool plot/storylines. ^^; Plus this was done for fun. But um, it'll have it's twist and turns. So hope you'll stick by<3
And thanks for 1000+ fans. TAT;! I didn't think I'd reach that many lol... I'll hold a contest when I get further enough into the manga<3

User's Comments:

sekoshi,

You are very good. Excellent job on this! :)

anime_tomboi,

Woohoo, second comment~

Your pages always look so spiffeh.

Do you use screentones, or do it on the computer?

spinnytwirl,

oh, did you ink this pge by hand this time? o.o

hiromi,

anime_tomboi - Screentones are done on the computer ^^

spinnytwirl - No~ the inking's done digitally ^^

Kikirini,

Ahh, I finally got time to read this. And holy crap 1000 fans. I'm jealous.

I forgive the cliche, mainly because almost no anime is original anymore...

Anyway, looking forward to your next update. :)

surrube,

that was a bit out of the blue.

minarestu,

yay i can't wait for more ^-^ *jumps on the bed saying yay* i wuv your comic

lePANDA,

Please save who? :o
Oooh, who's that coming out of...somwhere? o 3 o ;

Remmy,

STAR WARS FLASHBACK.

kitangel,

nothing wrong with it being a bit cliche. Can't wait to see the next page.

You deserve all your favs Hiromi! <3

RowanWatersprite,

Oh I love the second panel.
Great work, and we don't mind the cliche

shiroh,

cliched or not...this is cool comic...

devilevil,

omg hu's hand is that.
horror~

Kokkoii-Matoku,

Awww Come on Alice help the cute little rabbit, he's adorable!

Subaru,

Please, give us more!! :P

Midnitergrl,

I absolutely adore Alice in any shape or form! Continue please!

Avengeli,

OH MY GOD IT'S A HAND!!! *giggle*

Powder Rune,

Haha, if people still didn't enjoy cliches, there wouldn't be any! Besides, I think it'll make sense and play out nicely.

Their expressions in the 2nd and 3rd panels are just touching. I swear it's the way you draw eyes. So large, moist, and expressive!

xXTheMadHatterXx,

I'm a hardcore Alice fan! As long as you don't have Tweedledum/Tweedledee, I'm fine. (I hate those guys, and they weren't even in the book! TT.TT Also, why did the movie have to cut out the Mock turtle, anyway? Also,movie Cheshire is creepy! Sorry, I'm ranting, like one of those sixty year old mans who are all like, "Well in MY day!")

Hikaru,

Can't wait to see more.

Oh, I love using old storylines too. XD

I should be working on my comic but... well you get the idea. O__o

Meepy,

I'm late D: *sniff*

And congratulations on 1000+ fans! :3

Omg, mysterious hand of doom! xO

CITRUS.LOVE,

FREAKY HAND!!! DD<!!!!!

janirotluvx,

WHAT IS THAT CREEPY HAND!!!!!

:> Perdy pageeeeee!!
No one would turn that cute googly eyed boy wish down =D!!!

HungrySpider,

He's so adorable!! *squishes him*

Yuki (Guest),

It's those darn hands coming from thin air again *tsk tsk* Can't get away from them ><

Kaiarynn,

AHHH!!! I LOVE THIS!!! It is soooo cute! I love the story of Alice and your version is sooo much cuter!!! Please hurry and update as fast as you can. I am going to die from impatience *dies*
THANX

Maya,

New Fan I love your art style. It looks pretty professional. >:3

Rat-Orpheus,

I like the plot and art style. Gets back to the old anime. Like an older, better version of Fruits Basket. Only it's new!!!

Anyway, keep up the excellent work!

darklightartist,

this is a good story. I like it ^^ It has an interesting plot.

Mushroom-chan,

:B i like it ! nice art, i think ill stick around with this one.
when i first saw the summery i thought it was gonna be a cliche manga agian but i have a good feeling about his one.

amyflower,

Ah, this comic is awesome :D Your art is very clean and the expressions are funny. It might be a little cliche-ish but, it's got twists. Great job, and keep up the awesome work! Can't wait for more!

Falco Vespertinus,

...really awesome comic, I'm looking forward for more updates! <3

Kokkoii-Matoku,

I Agree I agree with that!
If no one liked cliche'd storylines we wouldn't have anything right now!
Everybody would try so hard to not make anythign clich'e and the story would come out ridicoulous in the process!
^-^! ITS OK! i like cliched storylines too, but with its on TWIST!
That makes me read it.
If it was ALL CLICHE'D and like, in the first 7 pages, you can predict the storyline. whelp i wouldn't like that >w<

I can't predict the storyline! ^^ and even if i did, i wouldn't blab it out DX, like somepeople do, and ruin it for the others.

So! ^^! YOUR GOOD TO GO!