Author's Comments:

hiromi,

Happy New Year~~
And, here's a page!

Edit: Wow it's almost gonna be 2 years since I started this manga..XD;;
Time flies... AND I'M STILL AT CHAPTER 2. orz
Oh well.

User's Comments:

ReuS,

Happy New Year Hiromi! I'm sure you're doing your best. I feel that way about my own manga sometimes. Anyway I'm loving your story. And here's to more of it in 09! ^^

TwilightRain888,

Who said she ever opened the protal, huh? u peoples shouldnt assume. lol

Mythee,

Wowww 8D;; Happy new year! n-n

akira16,

a post another page!
thanx!

kimiko-chan,

HAPPY NEW YEAR^^

BAMchick96,

happy new years wow another new page in the past week <33

janirotluvx,

*steals your toning skilled hands @w@!!!! guwahaha I love those couples(?!)!!!! 0w0

*wonder what's going to happen next 0w0w0w0

kuroi_hitsuji,

Happy new year!
and..omg he looks like Caedmon! anyway...
HISAKI'S FROM WONDERLAND! YAY!

Pentland,

Broken record time - Happy new year to you too! 8D
Lol, I love her little confused chibi face in the top left XD

*Suki*,

Happy New Years. :D

Ammy_theera,

when you assume
you make an ass out of you and me ^^
weee updates *happy*

Yassa,

I really like your manga, I really do, but T_T... the way you upload it, makes it really hard to understand the story... I don't even know the characters anymore, and forgot the storyline x_X (uh, I shouldn't be the one sayin this, I'm a lazy artist too T3T')
you should like... make 5 pages and tone them, and upload them ...if you uplad a page and the next page 4 months later, everyone forgets the story you know... and that kinda ruins your story ._.

well, that's the only thing I wanted to complain about :3 you KNOW you have a cute style neh~

1firefierce,

YAY! Update, update! Wazz gunna happen?!?! ^^

Lackadaisy,

Yay, and update! Your art's as beautiful as ever, and I like how you do the highlights on black hair now.

Happy new year!

Natsuki,

omg. i wanna chop off her hair and use it as a wig @u@ or sell it :'D and get rich. nvm

*u*b *wants to go thru the portal*

xotaku.chanx,

aaah This is so amazing *___*
If you don't mind my asking, what program do you use? And do you draw mostly on paper or on the computer?

MichiNeko,

^w^ i looove nemixray~!! lolll~
bahahah soo cute~ your pages are so professional~!! @w@@@ i is jealouzz of your skillllz ;A;;;;
&i cant wait until they get to wonderlaaand~! *u*

Dark BlazerX,

She draws mostly on pencil and paper, and she tones/colors on the computer using Open Canvas 4.

janirotluvx,

ƒ„ƒTuzeeeee www

nightmaresky,

Wow you drawings are so cute.... Can't wait to see more.

Revy-2-Hands,

*tilts head* I'm starting to like this.

glacie_team,

OuO waaa! <333
I want to more <33333

BRM (Guest),

... Something. OMY I love it!! <3 Lol, "Alice" is so funny XD Her sister is, too. And... the Cheshire cat, as well, but everyone loves him... Right? XD -is not bothering to check if people really do or not-

This story (I dunno what to call it. I am a failure.), overall, is kawaii~~!!

komyn (Guest),

Review Reviewing the whole story, I have to say that the plot seems to be well developed, but you're going a little fast with it. Everything seems sudden and jumpy because there is no lead up. Like with the knights: one page they're standing there buissines-like, the next they're acting sort of silly, the next they're almost kissing. It seems like the character's personalities other that the cheshire cat and alice are underdeveloped too.

As for the art, its good, but some events are hard to destinguish, like in the very beginning when alice bumps into her sister's boyfriend. It was like a puzzle trying to figure out what was going on. It also seems to me like you rush certain frames as well, maybe those you dont want to draw as much. try evening out your effort.

Overall I must say its pretty well done. As I said, your plotline is entertaining and has an original twist to it. The cheshire cat is your most believable character, shiro is your least but that may be because we havent seen much of him yet. Very promising overall.

janirotluvx,

Komyn - I usually don't mind looking at reviews but yours weren't agreeable. Her name's not "Alice" first of all, she's Yuika. I think Alice is just her title. Unless you were calling her that for fun which I don't think you were, reading your post. Second of all, she didn't bump into her sister's boyfriend Hisaki, it was just a random guy walking in the hall way. That's how much you pay attention to on what's going on in the story. You seemed like you just rushed on reading this manga so that's probobly why you're confused on certain areas?

Also, frame... as in panels?(sorry if I'm wrong but) really now, like this manga is supposed to be her none effort manga that she did for fun(which I don't know if she is now), so I don't think she would put effort on coming up with paneling/what ever, really. I think she rather puts effort on what she would want to draw.

mikan (Guest),

Is it just me, or does hiromi seem to be a target for a lot of criticism...?? Why is that anyway? I never see other webcomics criticized nearly as much as anything hiromi creates (even if it does take on the appearance of being "constructive"). :/

Keep up the good work, hiromi, your story is perfect.

hiromi,

Mayu - *Gives you A++++++++++++++++ for reading the comic very well* @w@

mikan - I don't know...
I gave up. No matter what kind of story I write people will always leave some nitpicks. @w@ *doesn't really bother anymore*
Aww thanks... Even though they're far from being perfect.

Plus this komyn person's forgetting the fact that the story's barely gotten anywhere yet, really.

ChaiRain (Guest),

Wow, please do more. You have good art skill, the story is nice also :)

Kia (Guest),

I have a few things to say:

1.) This manga is awesome, and I <3 Chesire.
2.) I actually agree with komyn on his/her points, especially with the rushed frames part.
3.) I'm a little annoyed at mikan and janirotluvx who are criticizing komyn. Komyn was only trying to be helpful to hiromi by taking the time to write out a review to help hiromi's manga. And yet, she only gets snapped at and criticized for trying to be helpful, no matter how it seems. People seem to be acting as if komyn wrote "your manga sucks." I'm rather disappointed that these things happen.
4.) I'm probably going to get flamed on all sides for writing this.

Cally-chan,

Hiro-chan- don't listen to people that critic your comic that way.

They always want to say something just to have a debate like this. There is nothing wrong with this comic. Nobody critics other comics on here but since this has so many fans they always come here with that.

Don't listen <3

hiromi,

Kia - I don't think anyone snapped.
...And I think I'll ask for help if I need one. @w@;
I am also dissapointed at the fact that people always have to find something to nitpick but whatever.
But, glad you seem to like the manga. ^^

Calleh -
Thanksss<3 @w@
Yeah I noticed, haha.
Oh well, if people don't like what I do, I can't change their minds.

janirotluvx,

Kia - Wow, like am I supposed to take you serious right here? @w@;..... lmao.
Aw well, since you asked for it,

1)I'm rather disappointed the fact that you don't know the difference between a good review and a bad review. Weather it's their opinion or not, what matter is that they weren't even accurate about what they mentioned in their review. I'm sorry but where in the review were they "trying" to be "helpful"?

2)As Hiro mentioned, what part of our comments seemed like it was "snapping" anyways? Because we weren't putting as much emoticon like we usually do? Or were we saying "OMG YOU SUCK AT WRITING REVIEW. (end of comment)"? oh PH-LEEEEEESE. Besides, as much as he/she has a right to critisize on Hiro's manga, I think we have a right to critisize on what Komyn wrote since they did write a review in public.

3) you're hypocritical. You said how it is disappointing that we went off on critisism that Kyomyn write, and now you're going off on us for criticising what that person wrote? Seriously.

4) I don't see you guys writing critisisms on "rushed frames" on other mangas/comics so you guys are just being a jerk to Hiro. Hers isn't even nearly as bad as what some other people would do.

Isu,

O____O ermmm... When will people learn that unless an author clearly comes out and ASKS for serious critiques, it's generally not publicly welcome? Although there are some people who may not believe it, some (and by some I mean MOST) of the people who put up a comic here are just doing it for fun, so if they want to rush or what have you, that's their own business. They don't need you to point out what are 'faults' by your standard.

If you want to give her or any artist some advice on how to 'better' their comic, try PMing him/her next time :)

Hiro, don't change anything you're doing with anything @w@;;;

hiromi,

Isu - haha I'm not planning on it. @w@
Thanks <3